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Chapter Twenty-Three: MILE

Sorry for my absence. As some of you know, I am a small business owner and recently just bought my own space to work out of- so I've been renovating and working on that. No excuse not to update, but I promised to finish the story, so I am going to continue to work hard :) I'm off to write chapter 24 immediately. Figured I owe y'all. I'm also going to reply to all of your beautiful comments from last chapter, because I think it's important to acknowledge them all- I just got behind.

Anyway, enjoy! Oh and I hope a certain someone enjoys the third paragraph.... it's for you ;)

Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language
Author: Honor
Chapter Twenty-Three: ToughCollapse )

Chapter Twenty-Mile: Mile

I went a little crazy with this chapter- I figured I owed you guys for sticking with me even after I gave them shitty awkward sex. This chapter is really long and really graphic :) Enjoy and please comment, comment, comment!

Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language and boooysex- LOTS of it.
Author: Honor
Chapter Twenty-Two: AirplanesCollapse )
Sorry it took me so long. I'll be quicker this time. Not giving up on it :) It'll keep coming. Sorry for the less than romantic sex. It's really important to me that Mile stays raw and honest, and in real life, the sex sucks sometimes.

Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language and boooysex
Author: Honor
Chapter Twenty-One: GlowCollapse )

Chapter Twenty- Mile

I'm a bitch for the last chapter. And I'm a bitch for this one too. But I just couldn't seem to help myself.... ;) I do apologize for the sexual frustration I bring into your lives. Enjoy. Comment or die.......

Oh and I'm getting a new layout tonight thanks to my fabulous friend Jeni! I'll see what yall think then I'll get to work on 21.

Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language and boooysex
Author: Honor
Chapter Twenty: Fuck Me- For Real This TimeCollapse )

Chapter Nineteen

Chapter Nineteen to earn back everyone's love.... what can I say, I'm sucking up now ;) Let me know if you're reading- I honestly don't know how many of you I have left and if there's a point to this, but I'm just going to keep writing for now.

To anyone who didn't read my last post, I posted chapter eighteen after a year of not posting and an explanation. Please look under this post for more details.


Enjoy! <3

Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language
Author: Honor
Chapter Nineteen: Fuck MeCollapse )
It's a miracle. You thought I was gone for good, but I decided I would ring in the new year with finishing this damn story. So an explanation of why I disappeared- I decided I liked Tike better than Zaylor. Yeah, yeah, yeah. I've heard it before. And I have been super busy with my career. I also got stuck in my plot line and didn't know what to do.

I guess the main question is why am I bringing it back. Well the main reason was all of your comments. I'm really lucky to have so many readers and I'm a bitch for fucking you guys over. I'm sorry and I'll fix it- I'll finish MIle already, alright? So thank you for whining and bitching- it worked.... hah. I really do appreciate those of you who commented to me though. The other reason is I want to start a new story, and figured I couldn't very well do that until I finished Mile.

I haven't written really in a year- so forgive me, I'm rusty. Chapter 19 is already written, this is not a one time update. I want to warn you that it might seem like the story suddenly got very serious. It's still Mile. Taylor will still call scantily clad women tramps and there will still be awkawrd boysex to come. I apologize for the somewhat serious turn the story has taken, it needed to be done for the sake of the characters. I promise you will end up happy with the story.

Anyway, here it is. Chapter 19. 10 pages, 73 paragraphs, 3,555 words. To be honest with you, last night before I wrote this I decided I had to go through and read all of the chapters again- every freaking word. I had no clue what happened. I apologize to those of you who have to do that. I promise it will be worth it, the story is being finished so if you need to refresh, don't feel like you're wasting your time. I have about another 15 chapters to write I think.

Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language
Author: Honor
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Chapter Seventeen: MILE




Well, this is my opportunity to show off a bit. You'll notice a change in this chapter, but it's just temporary. It's not funny or witty or exciting. The chapter is slow, dusty- it ambles along. But I really took it as an opportunity to take my time more with the writing and just enjoy the process of composing a sentence instead of rushing through. Sorry it took longer than expected. Thanks again for all the usual, awesome feedback. I'll reply to the stuff I haven't replied to shortly. Much, much love. -honor

Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: This chapter? Heh, like G except for the F word.
Author: Honor
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Chapter Sixteen: MILE




Well, it took me an extra two days to get this posted. Please forgive me. When I first had his chapter written, it was 8 pages. It didn't feel right. It was way too rushed, not personal enough, unbelievable. I wasn't willing to give that to you guys so I re-wrote it. It has more than doubled in length. It is 18 *pages* of naked Zaylor. Heh, the title of the chapter pretty much says it all.

While I would consider this chapter to be very sexual and inappropriate for the eyes of minors, reverends, or grandmas, it is really nothing too extreme. You'll see as you read it. The next chapter is already written (for real this time) and will be posted in a day or two. Thanks in advance for the comments! Love everyone!

*Ps. Love for skywars for putting up with my ridiculous "When I write about balls... what do I call them? Balls?" questions. I wouldn't have been able to write this without her lovely coaching haha. Ps. For anyone who hasn't figured it out by what I said here, I have no sexual experience what so ever so this was pretty tough. Thank god for Hanson erotica and googling "gay men sex"*

Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: NC-17. SEXUAL CONTENT.
Author: Honor
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Chapter 15- Mile



If I may, I am going to take a quick moment to rant. I couldn't help but notice someone ran to a Hanson gossip forum about a day after I posted one of my chapters and complained about writers who say they will post more chapters when there's a certain amount of feedback. This was the day after I did that, so while I could be jumping to conclusions, I am nearly 95 percent sure this poster as referring to MILE.

So I just wanted to respond to that and say first of all, if you don't like the way I present my story, don't read it. Kapeesh?

Secondly, I don't know if the poster is a writer as well, but I would like to say to my defense that I am a working college student trying to work on four fanfictions and one real life writing project right now. It is necessary to prioritize my writing. Saying, "I will post more after 15 comments" not only buys me some time to actually get more writing ready, but it motivates me to want to do it. In addition, it helps me gage which one of my stories deserves my time most at the present moment. Right now, I get the most feedback on MILE and therefore it's getting a lot of my attention. Writing hanfic these days is difficult because the audience is a lot smaller and the band makes it hard to feel very inspired. I think it's rather ridiculous to bash the way the few remaining fanfic writers dsitribute their chapters.

End rant. Other than that, I just wanted to say my readers are wonderful and I appreciate all the feedback! :) I have chapter 16 and 17 written already as well, but I'm going to space them out a tiny bit (maybe post 16 in a day or two) just so first of all I can make some edits if what you guys say in the comments section change my mind about things, and also just so I don't rush the story too much. Oh, and I apologize. No Zaylor sex scenes in this chapter, but you are close :)

Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for now.
Author: Honor
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Chapter Fourteen: MILE



Despite the fact that the title of this chapter isn't serious, this chapter tends to be fairly more serious than the others. Nothing too racey in this chapter but the next chapter? You can count on some boysex :) Enjoy! Thanks for all the awesome feedback everyone. You keep me writing.

Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for now.
Author: Honor
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