Anyway, enjoy! Oh and I hope a certain someone enjoys the third paragraph.... it's for you ;)
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language
Author: Honor
Chapter Twenty-Three: ( Tough )
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language and boooysex- LOTS of it.
Author: Honor
Chapter Twenty-Two: ( Airplanes )
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language and boooysex
Author: Honor
Chapter Twenty-One: ( Glow )
Oh and I'm getting a new layout tonight thanks to my fabulous friend Jeni! I'll see what yall think then I'll get to work on 21.
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language and boooysex
Author: Honor
Chapter Twenty: ( Fuck Me- For Real This Time )
To anyone who didn't read my last post, I posted chapter eighteen after a year of not posting and an explanation. Please look under this post for more details.
Enjoy! <3
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language
Author: Honor
Chapter Nineteen: ( Fuck Me )
I guess the main question is why am I bringing it back. Well the main reason was all of your comments. I'm really lucky to have so many readers and I'm a bitch for fucking you guys over. I'm sorry and I'll fix it- I'll finish MIle already, alright? So thank you for whining and bitching- it worked.... hah. I really do appreciate those of you who commented to me though. The other reason is I want to start a new story, and figured I couldn't very well do that until I finished Mile.
I haven't written really in a year- so forgive me, I'm rusty. Chapter 19 is already written, this is not a one time update. I want to warn you that it might seem like the story suddenly got very serious. It's still Mile. Taylor will still call scantily clad women tramps and there will still be awkawrd boysex to come. I apologize for the somewhat serious turn the story has taken, it needed to be done for the sake of the characters. I promise you will end up happy with the story.
Anyway, here it is. Chapter 19. 10 pages, 73 paragraphs, 3,555 words. To be honest with you, last night before I wrote this I decided I had to go through and read all of the chapters again- every freaking word. I had no clue what happened. I apologize to those of you who have to do that. I promise it will be worth it, the story is being finished so if you need to refresh, don't feel like you're wasting your time. I have about another 15 chapters to write I think.
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for language
Author: Honor
Chapter Eighteen: ( Selfish )
Well, this is my opportunity to show off a bit. You'll notice a change in this chapter, but it's just temporary. It's not funny or witty or exciting. The chapter is slow, dusty- it ambles along. But I really took it as an opportunity to take my time more with the writing and just enjoy the process of composing a sentence instead of rushing through. Sorry it took longer than expected. Thanks again for all the usual, awesome feedback. I'll reply to the stuff I haven't replied to shortly. Much, much love. -honor
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: This chapter? Heh, like G except for the F word.
Author: Honor
Chapter Seventeen: ( Stillness )
Well, it took me an extra two days to get this posted. Please forgive me. When I first had his chapter written, it was 8 pages. It didn't feel right. It was way too rushed, not personal enough, unbelievable. I wasn't willing to give that to you guys so I re-wrote it. It has more than doubled in length. It is 18 *pages* of naked Zaylor. Heh, the title of the chapter pretty much says it all.
While I would consider this chapter to be very sexual and inappropriate for the eyes of minors, reverends, or grandmas, it is really nothing too extreme. You'll see as you read it. The next chapter is already written (for real this time) and will be posted in a day or two. Thanks in advance for the comments! Love everyone!
*Ps. Love for ![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small}
skywars for putting up with my ridiculous "When I write about balls... what do I call them? Balls?" questions. I wouldn't have been able to write this without her lovely coaching haha. Ps. For anyone who hasn't figured it out by what I said here, I have no sexual experience what so ever so this was pretty tough. Thank god for Hanson erotica and googling "gay men sex"*
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: NC-17. SEXUAL CONTENT.
Author: Honor
Chapter Sixteen: ( Suck )
If I may, I am going to take a quick moment to rant. I couldn't help but notice someone ran to a Hanson gossip forum about a day after I posted one of my chapters and complained about writers who say they will post more chapters when there's a certain amount of feedback. This was the day after I did that, so while I could be jumping to conclusions, I am nearly 95 percent sure this poster as referring to MILE.
So I just wanted to respond to that and say first of all, if you don't like the way I present my story, don't read it. Kapeesh?
Secondly, I don't know if the poster is a writer as well, but I would like to say to my defense that I am a working college student trying to work on four fanfictions and one real life writing project right now. It is necessary to prioritize my writing. Saying, "I will post more after 15 comments" not only buys me some time to actually get more writing ready, but it motivates me to want to do it. In addition, it helps me gage which one of my stories deserves my time most at the present moment. Right now, I get the most feedback on MILE and therefore it's getting a lot of my attention. Writing hanfic these days is difficult because the audience is a lot smaller and the band makes it hard to feel very inspired. I think it's rather ridiculous to bash the way the few remaining fanfic writers dsitribute their chapters.
End rant. Other than that, I just wanted to say my readers are wonderful and I appreciate all the feedback! :) I have chapter 16 and 17 written already as well, but I'm going to space them out a tiny bit (maybe post 16 in a day or two) just so first of all I can make some edits if what you guys say in the comments section change my mind about things, and also just so I don't rush the story too much. Oh, and I apologize. No Zaylor sex scenes in this chapter, but you are close :)
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for now.
Author: Honor
Chapter Fifteen: ( Sexual Innuendo )
Despite the fact that the title of this chapter isn't serious, this chapter tends to be fairly more serious than the others. Nothing too racey in this chapter but the next chapter? You can count on some boysex :) Enjoy! Thanks for all the awesome feedback everyone. You keep me writing.
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: R for now.
Author: Honor
Chapter Fourteen: ( Los Angeles Twinks )
The link is.... RIGHT HERE!.
Much love to everyone. I will have another chapter up within the next mmmm let's say, 48 hours. -
Sorry this took me a little longer to put up, especially after such awesome feedback last time, but I think the wait was worth it. It's a bit longer than some chapters and while I don't necessarily think the plot is any better than the other chapters, I think you'll notice my writing is superior in this chapter to the previous. I was just on fire when writing this, or something. Enjoy! Can't wait to hear what you all think. I'm a bit worried about the fight, have fun, fight, have fun vibe of all the chapters, but that's just kind of how their relationship is. And eventually, there will be other subplots. Don't worry :)
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Rating: Since someone asked- R for now- but will eventually include sex scenes and therefore I will have to tack a NC-17 rating to it.
Author: Honor
Chapter Thirteen: ( Fluorescent Alcoholic Drinks )
The Consequences That Are Rendered was one of the best stories I've read in a long time. It's short, very quick to read (like 12 chapters total), but it was really creative and well done. I give the author credit for such a different idea. For the record, if you are not comfortable with the idea of Taylor being raped by his father, then I don't suggest you read it. But if you're cool with that, check it out. Lemme know what you think and let HER know what you think! :) Ps. It's depressing as fuck, but in a, "how did that author drag me in so well?" kind of way.
The Consequences That Are Rendered
Alright, so in this chapter you'll see, Zac is not quite so honest with Taylor about his "experience." While I like that he's like that, I am a bit concerned about the previous chapters. I've read this story a bunch of times as I've written it, and I cannot seem to remember for the life of me if Taylor KNOWS that Zac hasn't slept with anyone but him, or if he just assumes it and Zac thinks about a lot. If Taylor knows, then I will have to change this chapter a bit to make it work. Let me know if I screwed that up. Other than that, I like this chapter more than some of ther others. I look forward to all of your lovely comments. Thank you to all of you giving feedback. It's making the story come faster, eh? Funny how that works! Seriously though, thank you. And pass the word along to your friends if you like this. :) Enjoy!
Ps. I put all the chapters in my memories if that's helpful to some of you.
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Author: Honor
Chapter Twelve: ( Taysexual )
Here is another chapter! Thrilling in it's own way. Taylor might not be calling people out about their homosexual gestures in a night club, but he is stripping down for Zac. Enjoy! Thanks for the comments so far on the last chapter. MWAH.
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Author: Honor
Chapter Eleven: ( Fried Octopus )
I know I have neglected And With Each Mile for way too long, but I had a lot going on in my life and I just got really busy. I'm very sorry, but the inspiration is back! I wrote two more chapters for all of you last night and I am working on Chapter Ten so expect the story to start moving again. I'm very sorry. Stick with me! It was all of your comments that forced me to keep going. It's just about to get good :)Here's chapter Eight!
Title: And With Each Mile
Genre: Zaylor Slash.
Author: Honor
Chapter Eight: ( Strip Tease )
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